General Comments:

You've presented a fine, in-depth analysis of this film. Your analysis exhibits knowledge of what message you think Richter was attempting to get across to his audience and you also demonstrate good use of elements we've learned in previous courses dealing with film- camera usage, positions, time, rhythm, clarification, intensification, depth, size of objects in relation to frame, lighting, primary/secondary motion, etc. You prsent the reader of your critical analysis with in depth descriptions in an easy to understand manner which allows an individual who hasn't seen this film to visualize these images being portrayed by Richter; and you also allow the reader who has no previous knowledge in the field of media aestheics to understand what elements were used by Richter and have thoroughly demonstrated why you feel he used them.
Ghosts Before Breakfast